Your assignment this week asks you to post your edited versions of some sentences in need of proofreading. As we attempt to recapture some lost time please consider this comparison from the reading I assigned. Even these two images are food for thought and present these two famous American figures as opposites. If you feel compelled, you may comment on the comparison the images present to us here. I hope to see you all on next Monday after we set our clocks ahead on hour.....
1. Every boy and girl should bring their books to class.
ReplyDelete2.Every morning at the crack of dawn, he would go for a jog.
3.To be revised, the university listed three mandatory requirements.
4. We must go back to the basics if we desire a fresh start.
5.Under serious threat from past associates, the man on the stand required constant security and protection.
6.This dispute must be settled by an unbiased judge.
7.He could discuss a complicated problem with childish simplicity.
8.The computer company started to swim in debt.
9.Although the President's speech was vague, many believed he favored a tax raise.
10.Voting should always have your undivided attention and most focused judgement.
General Ulysses S. Grant and General Robert E. Lee were like the text stated, two very different yet alike figures. One thing these two pictures of these men differ that popped out to me first was that you can notice General Lee has somewhat of a straightened posture, almost like he is uncomfortable. Grant, on the other hand, is casually leaning up against a tree. I feel like this right here is a picture made of a thousand words of explanation because of for one, their different financial and social classes that they hailed from. The one who is standing up back straight is looking very proud. The one leaned up against a tree looking relaxed and rugged is Grant, The general whom hailed from a working class mountain or western frontier family. The postures in the pictures match the men's backgrounds.
ReplyDelete1. Every student should bring his or her books to class.
ReplyDelete2. He went for an early jog every morning.
3. For future revision, the university listed three mandatory requirements.
4. If we want a fresh start, we had better focus on the immediate business at hand.
5. The witness required continual security, feeling threatened by the drug dealers.
6. An unbiased judge must settle this dispute.
7. With childish simplicity, he managed to explain a difficult problem.
8. The computer company began to undergo debt.
9. While his speech was vague, the President favored a tax hike.
10. A voter should use their best judgment.
1. Every student should bring their books to class.
ReplyDelete2. He jogged at 5 in the morning, every day.
3. For future revision, the university has listed three madatory requirements.
4. We better get started if we want to get a fresh start.
5. The witness required continual securtiy because he or she was threatened by drug dealers.
6. This dispute myst be settled by an uninterested third party.
7. He managed to explain a difficult problem with ease.
8. The computer company began to struggle with their debt.
9. The president's speech was vague but implied that He favored a tax increase.
10. Each voter should use his or her best judgment.